tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6041121640585147279.post1683381958375541281..comments2010-06-02T16:00:37.399-07:00Comments on Write to Honor: The MosqueAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07606740303032584056noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6041121640585147279.post-989484425656245822010-05-23T15:43:23.882-07:002010-05-23T15:43:23.882-07:00The short answer: completely fictional.
I have ser...The short answer: completely fictional.<br />I have served in Iraq, but never had that direct experience. I really like writing fiction that has facts scattered throughout the storyline to make the reader wonder if it's real or not. I guess it sort of like turning facts into fiction :) I hope to write a novel one day, along the same type of theme as my first post, but I'm not a writer- just tying to learn a lot through these short posts. So, PLEASE don't hesitate to give me feedback.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07606740303032584056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6041121640585147279.post-42957071498072887662010-05-23T15:00:44.477-07:002010-05-23T15:00:44.477-07:00This is amazing. It comes on very harsh and doesn&...This is amazing. It comes on very harsh and doesn't let up. Like Marc, I'm curious how much of your own experiences this was based on.John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6041121640585147279.post-50809616743741539162010-05-22T05:49:49.155-07:002010-05-22T05:49:49.155-07:00Very intense piece here. Kept me riveted the whole...Very intense piece here. Kept me riveted the whole way through. Hope the little boy makes it.<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttp://www.jmstrother.com/MadUtopia/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6041121640585147279.post-57036277075320778252010-05-21T12:54:42.996-07:002010-05-21T12:54:42.996-07:00Do you have direct experience of this, or are you ...Do you have direct experience of this, or are you just incredibly well read on the subject because it reads very authentically. The only thing I would say is it could do with a bit more imagery and metaphor, to compare sights in terms of something else, just to give us an insight into the character's inner feelings and responses.<br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.com